The story, near to final

Blog Post   By: Zev Goldberg

Foybulier and the Penny Killers.

 

To begin with apologies for the lateness of this essay, I was sick for a week, then two other days so everything has been thrown out of order. But at long last; the semi-long awaited story, so enjoy.

Oh also the first 5 pages are back story and rules for this story so if you don`t care about that, go ahead and skill it.

But first some background don’t be fooled by the title it is not a gritty story (it was originally but not now) this will be a story with the theme of time travel, and something special for it. Oh also side note Foybulier may or may not live in Tucson, but since it won’t progress the plot in any real way we really don’t need to know. Oh I guess I should bring this up; since Foybulier is in too much debt you might be asking; “Why not just live/get loan from his parents?” well you see now, we don’t really know what happened to the parents. By the way I will state which Foybulier is which by stating a number next to them.

We begin with our main character Foybulier, he has a bachelor degree in thermal dynamics from a college that won’t progress the story at all so I won’t even name it. However Foybulier does want to pay off his debt of about $120,000 plus interest soon, so he wanted to play it smart, he became a Pipeline Technician (and yes you do in fact need a degree in thermal dynamics to be a pipe line technician), and everything started to look actually quite promising for him. Until the pipeline industry started doing layoffs, which Foybulier was greatly affected by; for he has no job, a mountain of debt and a degree that is not really all that accepted in the job market world. So everything has become garbage at this point as you can see for him, so Foybulier is now trying to indulge in a walk for that’s basically the only thing he can really afford. In this world that takes more than it will ever give, while on his walk he starts to think of what he liked best (or used to like best) history. So he started to think of the more memorable people in this world; such as Genghis Khan, Hitler, Stalin, Fidel Castro, Napoleon, Jack the ripper, Green river killer, Vlad the Impaler, Abraham Lincoln, and more. He tried to figure out what made them so memorable, and he realized something for other than Jack and Green river these are men of power (leaders) and they abused their power to gain more at the expense of others. Like business men of the 30`s people were as expendable as pennies. That’s when he began to think a little darker; he thought about maybe pennies should finally get the recognition they deserve. To have a new hope for people too, for we live in a world of seven billion and things aren’t getting any better maybe Foybulier should [slam]…then Foybulier walked into another person, before he could even react he fell over. When he looked up at whom he walked into he was surprised to find, it was himself. Literally. 

He now sees Foybulier, but more in distress and sweater than he could ever be, or at least as of yet. So as he dusked him and himself off him (the guy he bumped into), and asked (our Foybulier asked the new one) “This is going to sound crazy but-“the new Foybulier cut original off “I am you from one *week* in the future.” Before Foybulier 1 could even respond to that comment he felt a crippling pain in his chest, as if his chest was to rip open, and it did. Foybulier 1 split into three new ones, making four Foybulier`s in total. So now begins our journey of confusing portion, but before we should learn what is to happen next we hear from Foybulier from way at the end (he is the guy we bumped into a while ago). Foybulier 4 says that he has experienced all of these lives and knows what to do; He sends Foybulier 1 to go with lottery numbers and to rent a hotel, then wait for further instructions. Foybulier 1 is in such great disbelief and he would gasp but being split into three people in less than a minute time span can seem to make a person rather tiered as you may expect. But there was no time for that because he needed to go to the next plot point, I mean objective. Foybulier 2 is to invest in some stocks once Foybulier 1 has gotten the money (the lottery has $156,756 just to let you know). Foybulier 3 is now to be instructed to plan out the next “accidents” that will occur to large corporation owners to ensure the stocks they invest in, don’t fail.

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Day 1

This is Section 1 of a several part series where we will be following all the Foybulier`s on all their adventures so we will now begin with F1 and work our way down throughout the list; but I should warn you though theses time lines do criss cross a fair bit in the beginning but they do narrow out nearer to the end, so try not to get to confused. But if you do just post you confusions in the comments where I will try my best to explain what is going on.

Foybulier 1: With the newly received lottery numbers (so generously given by F4) F1 proceeded to enter them in, yet is a little disappointed to find out that he is not receiving the number one spot for lottery money (a whopping $487,689,300) but the measly 3^rd place, it higher outrage than you think, F1 stampedes down to F4 asking why is the money in the thousands when we could so easily get to be true millionaires (side note they have not received the money yet, because there is a three day grace period they between winning and receiving money)?

F4 explains; “You do realize that you would be putting our whole operation at risk, right?”

F1 with a confused yet disappointed look on his face replies; “So `taking care of` high ranking corporation business men isn’t too much risk for you?”,

F4 annoyingly glaring at F1; “Well you have to understand F1 that when people win the lottery they get their faces and names on newspapers, which is the equivalent of saying; I have a bunch of money, here I will even put a target on my back for you.”

F1 disturbed by that statement; “Ok fair point but we are still killing important people.”

F4 reestablishes; “Ok fair point but even if they do manage to track the murder to us, whom is really doing to believe that there`s another Foybulier running around, let alone four. Heck even the reader is skeptical about this whole setup.”

F1; “Oh so your saying that while one of us is in court the other will continue doing the incidents, for with no history of any siblings (much less twins) they will be forced to believe that there is someone else doing this, for all the other person was, someone at the wrong place at the wrong time.”

F4; “As overly complicated ideas go you got the main important points, plus you cleared up most problems the reader probably had with the story.”

F1; “But beyond the standard people may kill us aspects of the whole lottery prize money thing, why not go for the top 1^st spot, if we are to get new money anyways?”

F4; “Oh that, well you see I have been through this entire adventure too many times to count (for it is an infinite loop) and I think I found you answer. You see the universe has a sort of auto-correct system to ensure the idea of existence doesn’t go out of sync with everything else, ok? Well this system works a lot like the human body, in that it gets 99.999991% of all errors and fixes them all. But that extra .000009% still slips past, because even for the universe, nothing is perfect.”

F1; “So what does that have to do with anything?”

F4: “Well you see we are that .000009%, that the universe can`t fix, we are the cancer of the universe. But even as cancer goes, it still has rules, we cannot break past the fact that we can get the number one spot in the lottery, any more than how that last cancer can destroy all life on this planet. Oh by the way the last one was how the dinosaurs died off.”

F1; “Again still not answering the question, you are worse than bad boyfriends and politicians combined.”

F4; “Don’t worry I am almost there; for there was one Foybulier whom was able to do anything he wanted without destroying the timeline, the first one, but his problem was he never had knowledge of the number one spot, he legitimately guessed and he got enough numbers to get the third place in the lottery. Which now makes us on a set course to continue his (Foybulier original edition) attempt till we all, get it right. All versions of this situation have ended around the same, but with small variations down to the very number of breathes we took a day. This makes me very confident in that we could break this cycle, for we have veered off quite a bit from the way Foybulier 0 (that’s what I will call then original Foybulier), has done this whole story off in the first place. But there is one advantage of being a cancer in the universe that over does the metaphor a little too much.”

F1: “What?!?”

F4: “Recombination”

F1: “What do you mean?” with a frustrated look on his face.

F4: “With this recombination we change a little every time, but it looks roughly the same, but we have veered off so far from the original version so much that I am more than positive that we are to have this all turn back to normal.”

F1: “So wait are you the original?”

F4: “No, I mean yes, well mostly. I am the original whom has gone through this adventure many times over, and at the end of everyone, *we* all fuse back together, just enough to give me all your current/my pervious experiences, making me nearly out of this loop, but not quite.”

F1: “So why isn’t this your first time, or why hasn’t it worked, before?”

F4: “ Well, you see the way you discontinue becoming a cancer, is by causing enough variation throughout the world that it basically creates a new un-imaginable universe; a universe where are 

break the cycle.”

F1: “But that can’t exist, can it?”

F4: “Well with the whole infinite universe idea there does come one, and surprisingly only one were we do win (break the cycle), we are basically using the very cosmos to remove our cancer with our cancer. You can see why the universe has auto correct and why we don’t get the number one spot in the lottery, so do you have any more questions you commenters…….I mean F1?”

F1: “Well here is my last two; where did you get this idea and how many times have you been through this?”

F4: “Where else, but Einstein himself, well his works helped a bunch actually. For your second question I will contradict my statement from a while ago (word number ~1275) for this is my seventeenth time going through this (including now), and by Einstein`s work, it states you need 2.3354354% variation in a single universe to create a new one via the cancer way (the other way needs only .0000000000000006%, just by considering to make a decision you made a universe), so we got our work cut out for us. Oh by the way I have tried to do the do nothing trick, but that didn’t work out. Also one last rule, if any Foybulier dies along the way to the end point the cancer can be resolved.”

F1: “So wait does that include injuries?”

F4: “No, unlike this story, the universe does not have continuity errors, for you can’t have a broken arm if that reality did not exist in the universe with false perfection, but if you did say die that would trigger a reaction that could not continue the loop, for because you are so early in the time line you can still remain controllable by the universe`s laws, but someone like F3 or even F2 they have gone too far, before making another universe, they need a refresh, from the universe.”

F1: “What do you mean, a refresh?”

F4: “The universe is a refresh system, checking that all atoms in this FINITE reality have contributed to another universe, but in the context for us- cancer`s we fail to supply enough of a reality change to have anything new happen so we get sent back were we began, until we contribute a new universe  of any level. But unlike everyone else whom gets checked on every nanosecond to get a new universe to move through we get ~28-ish days, and if we can’t supply enough variation to change a universe we are mistaken as original Foybulier and sent back.”

F1: “So why would killing not help if we are looking for as much variation as possible?”

F4: “Well you see there was originally 6 Foybulier’s but on the third time around on my infinite loop one did die, by getting hit by a train.”

F1: “So how much variation did that bring?”

F4: “Well at first a lot (went up a whole percent) but now that the other versions of ourselves are aware of this they can only contribute so much, so then when the other Foybulier died on my seventh time around that only brought about .000006% change so I say it’s not worth it, ok.”

F1: “Ok that clears up way more than I expected, I guess I won’t comment silly questions about bad continuity in the story because it will only make the story filled with more rules and make it over all more confusing. (I am looking at ‘you’ comments at the bottom of YouTube videos).”

F4: “So please for the sake of having something occur in this story, ensure that the others do something cool in their stories to, for all that we basically did was spend four pages talking, including this very sentence (F4 is the one whom will break the forth wall the most, don’t worry).”

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Day 2

F3: “So what kind of ‘big business people’ are we going to be….taking care of?”

F4: “You are the one to carry it out, so it will not be a ‘we’ thing, but in any case I will start you off with; pear (parody of apple), then move your way down goggle.com (parody of google), take out the biggest of the bunch to get some stocks flowing, help with the slowing of this empire.”

F3: “So how will this ensure that the companies will stop there outsourcing?”

F4: “It won`t, but we need to understand that we don’t have as much control as we think we do. But the reason I suggest them first is to help, with your justification to do what you are willing to do.”

F3: “Wait what? I won`t do it then, they may not necessarily be good people but we shouldn’t kill for no reason, that’s chaos!”

F4: “Is it chaos to hurt those whom hurt others? For we know families die from starvation here just to have others jump to their death and fail to die thanks to the nets. No one really wins here.”

F3: “Does it really make it right though?”

F4: “I have been through this story 17 times now, you always end up the same, doing it anyways.”

F3: “But this one could be different right? Rights?!?”

F4: “The last ten times say no, oh also have you finished those, weapons yet? You usually complete this task by now.”

F3: “Oh, yeah, yeah they are almost perfected too, but may I ask why pennies. We could use nails so much easier than this?”

F4: “Well it serves two purposes one; a metaphor on us being the alleged peoples person that we apparently are, and two; it is harder to trace for at least with some nails there is a hardware store. But with pennies they are literally every where.”

F3: “So ok, I understand the how, what and even where, but I still do fail to understand the ‘why’ for why would we even need all this ‘new’ money if everything is going to get reset anyway?”

F4: “Well this is the ‘most’ sure fire way of variation I have found so far, the desperation of money creates a whole swell of new events and if we give it to the poor/others whom may need it (after we use it for our plans) we get much closer to this practically sacred new dimension that I would love to call home.”

F3: “So—“

F4: “This is your last question, our reader is getting way too bored of this already.”

F3: “Ok, ok all I wanted to state was how do you measure the level of variation in this ‘current’ universe anyway?”

F4: “Ugh, I will give you only a semi-convoluted answer; when I stated that we are the cancer of the universe, which is a misinterpreted use of my metaphor. What I probably should have said was we are the ‘illnesses’ of this universe in that we are actually ill. So when at the end of each month I go to see what my results are I am then scanned with a chemical synthesizer. I go first to see my radium levels, and it seems that when those levels decrease, they give changes to people’s reactions and even things as big as state shapes (when we killed F5 and F6). For you see we do go through roughly similar universes, but with a handful of different details that do in fact change. This seems to indicate by my theory, that if we get my radium levels low enough we can all go to the ‘new’ universe.”

F3: “So this ‘operation’ will kill you? Also yes I realize no more questions.”

F4: “Close it will give me cancer, then I will die, and don’t even think about killing me, because the loop will actually become too strong with variation, and you will practically get a new planet every time. But unlike the universe we want to go to, the over variation option will give you the worst life imaginable.”

F3: “I don`t see how you could possibly know this, it practically feels like you are giving us false hope, and this is all a sabotage. For you have zero reason, to leave this loop, because death is the outcome for you, besides how bad could this life be?”

F4: “A life without change is no life at all, and the life you will receive will be much like mine: nothing ever changing. Plus Einstein also stated that the alternate reality that has too much variation could have evolved from lizards in that one, or language never caught on. Or possibly most possible of them all where the earth, solar system never formed, and you end up in the vacuum of space.”

F3: “This isn`t real time travel where the location should change (if you have questions about that ask them in the comments). I don’t need to listen to this, I`m out.”

F4: “Despite you being the third in the lineup of us, you are always first to give up, quitter.”

F4 then sprinted after him seeing an odd flash back

F4: “Ok, F3 I understand you won`t be able to handle this, but please answer me one question.”

F3 sighed

F3: “What do you want?”

F4: “What is your favorite color?”

F3: “I`m out of here.”

F4: “No seriously.”

F3: “Well if it all matters this much to you, it`s white.”

F4: “Ok thank you, you can go now. If you still so desire.”

F3 left without another word.

Ten minutes before day 3 has begun

F4: “Well F2 and F1 I guess you each get new half jobs to help cover for F3, and his annoying nature, and inconsistent narratives.”

F1 & F2: “So besides telling us what to do, what you will now do?”

F4: “I will begin a large spree of crimes to get a large number of cops in the area you would be in, well,-not in your area. Oh also I will try my best to find F3, he seems to like go to Mexico. For some reason in all the times he did this before.”

F2: “How many times did he do this before?”

F4: “Including now, six times now. On the forth I found out what part of Mexico he went to.”

F1: “Well the bank should be opening soon, so I will get a move on.”

F2 & F4: “See you later.”- F4 says: “Oh the last F1 got mugged when he went out by the way.”

F1: “Excuse me?”

F4: “Well I just thought you may need some assistance, for stocks on a budget, is inefficient”

F2: “So you’re basically stating that what, is technically you is, worth less than a few thousand dollars.”

F1: “Is that what you’re saying?”

F4: “Look, now I didn’t mean for the statement to sound like that, well you know what; how about we F2 and I go. Or better yet, let’s have F1 stay here, and not let anyone in (other than secret knock) while I go out to get the ticket myself.”

F1: “Hmmm, you better not be playing us, for if F3 can quit, I don’t see why we couldn’t either.”

F4: “While we’re at it lets all just give up on getting a decent life ever again?”

F2: “This doesn’t actually matter guys, all I know is we need to go to the bank and fast.”

F1: “What do you mean?”

F2: “Well since F3 has our pin number too right?”

F2 & F4: “Yeah?”

F2: Don`t you see, he could take the money and run!”

F4: “We still shouldn’t go in a group for the whole ‘twins’ excuse doesn’t work when you’re going to the bank all under the same name.”

F2: “Ok fine let’s have F1 go because that was his job anyway.”

F1: “Ok, but what do I do if F3 shows up before I do?”

F4: “Just go, you may make it before him. Maybe you can reason with him.”

F1: “Wait wasn’t I about to get mugged?”

F4 & F2: “Go!”

-F1 left on a bike.

F4: “Ugh this is starting to sound a lot like last time.”

F2: “What happened last time?”

F4 stayed silent

F2: “What happened on loop number 16?” -F4 look at F2 with a look of pure dread

F4: “We need to go, because I can`t let what happened last time happen again.”

 F4 ran out the door, F2 followed. (Yes he locked the door.)

F2: “What`s going on?”

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Officially Day 3- (At the bank) and you know what, the time at the start of this day is 9:00 AM

F1 Was first to enter when the bank doors first opened to everyone. Then F1 knowing that ‘he made it first’ made little rush to go to the front desk.

F1: “Hello, I would like to make a, with draw.”

Bank teller: “Ok sir, how much?”

F1: “Half of everything in the account, please.”–I am skipping a lot of paper work because it won’t add anything. Oh also the reason F1 doesn’t take all, is because he thinks he will get mugged.

Bank teller: “Ok sir, please put in your pin number and I will give you your $52.”

F1: “Wait, there should be quite a bit more, for you see I won the lottery three days ago, did it not go through yet?”

Bank Teller with a perplexed look on her face, states that

Bank Teller: “It did go through, but it seems as though you redirected it to another account, online it seems you created this new account. Would you like me to redirect it?”

F1: “That would be great. Yes please.”

Bank Teller: “That’s odd.”

F1: “What?”

Bank Teller: “Other account, the new account was cleared, the same day.”

F1: “Are you sure?”

Bank Teller: “I could check again, but as far as I can tell there is nothing I can do, sorry.”

F1: “I never made a separate account, I must have been hacked, is there anything you can do about 

this?”

Bank Teller: “Well is this your name?”

F1: “Yes.”

Bank Teller: “Is this your account name?”

F1: “Yes.”

Bank Teller: “Well since it’s hard to make an accusation, of with draw, you yourself made, then proceed to take out later in a separate account, so I have my hands tied. Because now we are entering what appears to be fraud.”

F1: “Well is there anything I can do?”

Bank Teller: “I`m sorry, but your insurance policy and the FDIC do not cover losing money you took 

out earlier.”

F1: “Ok, well may I still take the $52 please?”

Bank Teller: “Oh, well but of course sir.”

F1 then leaves for the door.

Bank Teller: “Have a great day sir, come again soon.”

Outside the bank now….

F1: “Well I guess I can still put something to my name.”

F4 & F2-stated gasping for air: “We took two transfers to get here, were we here in time?”

F1: “I am afraid not, F3 got to it first, and all I now have to my name is $52.”

F2: “Oh this is bad, bad, bad, so what are we to do now that we can`t even get started. Plus we have 

F3 on the loose. He probably will get to the cops, to warn them about what we are trying to do.”

F4: “He won`t turn himself in for crimes he didn’t commit. But this will be some setbacks, but hey look to the bright side of things.”

F1: “What is the bright side?”

F4: “We now have a whole new slew of variation, we could truly get what we have been working towards.”

F1 & F2: “You, don`t know anything, there probably isn`t any universe where we get this so called utopia you brag all about. You got your theory from the guy who died a while back; when they thought Radium was good for you, but it just gave them tumors.”

F2: “Besides where would this tremendous amount of energy come from, since Universes don`t come cheap, my friend.”

F1: “Friend? Wait you mean you like this guy?”

F4: “F; 1 and 2. Just stop it. We can`t afford to waste all this time, for you said it yourself F3 is on the loose. We need to keep priories straight, let’s all go home and-“

F1: “Home, wait a minute, we left no one to guard it, F3 could have taken it back, or worse.”

F2: “Come on we just got here.”

F1 left on his bike, again.

F4: “I hate it, when F1 tries to act quirky.”

F2: “So you never did, tell me what F3 did, the last time, before this loop. What happened?”

F4: “Well you see-“

F2: “Don`t keep me in suspense, cut to the chase already.”

F4: “F3 put F1 into a coma, the last time, and he donated all the money to charity.”

F2: “Ugh, that’s what you kept us in suspense for, ugh, your worse than Shyamalan.”

F4: “Well we need to put into motion, our ‘new’ plans, so to keep F3 from intervening.”

F2: “This just gets better and better doesn`t it?”

F4: “Oh, one more thing.”

F2: “What?”

F4: “What’s your favorite color?”

F2: “Ugh, it`s black, ok.”

F4: “Thank you.”

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The Hotel (That’s where they were.) 10:35 AM Oh by the way side note the hotel thinks that all the Foybulier’s here are twins. The reason I didn`t keep that scene in here was it didn’t add to the story. But yes you can still find mention of the twin excuse as, a mere Easter egg to all of you whom remember the line and page number of that.

F1; sweater than ever can to the front desk, to find an unusually acting hotel manager.

Hotel Manager: “May I help you sir, did you leave something?”

F1: “No, why, did I check out recently?”

Hotel M.: “Why yes you did sir, about five minutes ago.”

F1: “Did I clear out all my bags for I may have forgotten one.”

Hotel M: “Oh wait you’re the twin I see.”

F1: “Yes, yes. Uh, may I enter please?”

Hotel M: “Well since we have not sold out the room yet, you can make a quick entrance, here`s the 

key card, make it fast now.” (Yes I do realize it`s harder than that, in real life.)

F1: “Thank you very much, it won`t be more than a minute.”

F1 made no hesitation, but ran up the stairs, due to the failure of the “out of order” elevator.

F2 & F4 got there not more than ten seconds after.

Hotel M.: “Don`t tell me you have, missing bags too?”

F4: “No, no.”

F2: “We were just wondering if you saw our brother go into the room recently.”

Hotel M.: “Why yes, just right then in fact.”

F2: “Great, may we go up there as well?”

Hotel M.: “I am sorry I can`t lend out another card like that now, you are free to wait in the lobby till 

he comes back though.”

F2: “Very well then, thank you very much.”

F4: “So, what happened with the elevator?”

Hotel M.: “Oh, that old thing? It seems as though the copper wiring got melted and just wasn`t 

deemed safe, for our guests. We are getting a repair man today.”

F4: “Oh I see, thank you.”

F4 walked over to F2

F2: “So do you thing F1 or F3 is in the room up there?”

F4: “I don`t know, this has never happened before, except during 16, there was. Oh never mind.”

F2: “Don`t do that nonsense of keeping me in the dark like that, either tell me or don`t tell me.”

F4: “Well last time during 16, F3 somehow put half the money in the elevator, because he thought 

that caring that much money around like that would look suspicious, so he went over to a more secure 

location would be nice so he should be picking up the money soon then.”

F2: “Why didn`t you tell me this? I thought that if there was one person I would know in the world, it 

would be myself. I thought I could trust myself. But apparently I may as well be wrong.”

F4: “It`s not like that, you see when us three reform to be one Foybulier again, The memories are all 

one third of each other, so I basically on have a handful of snippets to remember by, and it`s so easy 

to get confused when you only Have 28 days that might as well be exactly the same.”

F2: “Wait the three, wasn`t there six originally?”

F4: “Yes but it`s been so long for me, plus the stress, has really thrown everything off, for me. How 

would you feel to know so little, and yet so much more than most American`s can even perceive, 

what’s going to happen tomorrow, while I know. I may not know everything, but it’s more than you 

can possibly imagine.”

F2: “So who`s memories didn`t get to be with you?”

F4: “Well it`s a 33+33+33, problem, and while that`s still 99 percent I have that one percent so it`s 

not like I am missing anyone.”

F2: “So who is the 1% in your mind then if I get a third?”

F4: “F1, is the one, he loses the most since he has to relive this entire adventure with the loop, but he 

doesn`t have the gift, made of a curse. Known as my memory.”

F1 comes sprinting down with a duffle bag.

Continuation… so like 10:55 AM

F2 & F4: “So are you whom we think you are, or are you the other.

F1: “Come on guys it’s me, Foybulier.”

F4: “Ok, we better leave then, we need to get a head start if we are going to stop ‘you know who’.”

Hotel M.: “Sir, um the first one I saw, I need to talk to you.”

F1: “Ok will be right there, oh don`t worry guys I won`t leave you too often again.”

The Hotel M and F1 talk about something.

F2: “Well I suppose we need to go soon, who knows maybe we will come to the place that will save 

us all.”

F4: “So you are a believer now then.”

F2: “It may be false hope, but hope it is none the less. So now I at least have a motivation.”

F1: “Oh guys so what were you talking about, you weren`t talking behind my back were you?”

F2: “Oh course not, we need to get to work.”

F4: “Ok let’s go, I know the perfect place to go.”

Mom`s house 11:33 AM…seriously

(F1 goes in to ask for some money, from his mom so he gets a whopping $40.)

F1: “So mom this is me version 2 and version 4, oh and the third me ran off and we don`t know what happened to him and-“

Mom: “I have heard quite enough now, plus you know I don`t believe in silly stories, now go before I take my money back. Because your clearly doing something more than I can comprehend, so go, go.”

F2: “Are you sure?”

F1: “Yes she is, now let’s go.”

-They all leave

F2: “Oh I never got to ask you, what was in that duffle bag?”

F1: “Well it appears that there was a little more than meets the eye with our F3 acquaintance, for he seems to have bought some gold with it.”

F2: “You’re kidding.”

F1: “No I am not, we have roughly four pounds of gold here.”

F2 then looked on his phone

F2: “That`s $59,184. So why did we need money from mom?”

F1: “I needed gas money.”

F4: “I overheard, so why would F3 use gold instead of straight cash?”

F1: “To make it lighter, do you know how much $59,184 weights in portion to a mere four pounds?”

F2: “Well actually-“

F1: “Stop your googling, we need to get this stuff sold at some pawn shops.”

F2: “Well let’s get a move on

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Pawn shop #1 Day 4 8:37 AM

After sleeping in the car after an all-night drive to find a pawn shop that would sell this for even half its worth, they may have found something.

Cashier: “Welcome to ‘where the gold at?’ pawn shop. Please tell me if you need any assistance.”

F1: “Well now that you mention it.”

F2: “We have some gold to sell.”

Cashier: “Are you guy’s twins?”

F4: “Yes.”

Cashier: “Oh triplets, how nice.”

F2: “That’s what our mother said.”

Cashier: “How nice. Let me go get the measuring scale, while you go fill out the paper-work.”

F4: “Fantastic, thank you.”

Cashier comes back this a semi accurate scale

Cashier: “Ok, where`s the gold?”

F2: “Oh here you go.”

Cashier: “Ok seems to be 4.23 pounds, this comes to be $47,050. Since as far as I can tell so you get 

a slight bonus of 12%.”

F4: “That would be great.”

Cashier: “Ok here you go mister, Foybulier?”

F1: “That’s correct.”

Cashier: “Ok, whatever. Come again soon, tell your friends.”

F2: “Will do.”

They all go back to the car.

F4: “Ok so not all hope is lost, we may still be 12 hours behind schedule, but we still have a chance 

to make something of ourselves.”

F1: “So who are we going to ‘get’ next?”

F4: “Oh, just a little man by the name of Jobs Steve.”

F2: “Woah, wait isn`t he CEO of the pear company?”

F4: “I am telling you if we are going to do this we need to go all out.”

F1: “So who`s going to carry out, what?”

F4: “The jobs will be vaguely altered F2, will still be buying the stocks, while you (F1) and me, go on 

ahead to make our penny bombs, and just in case, we will need to get a sniper.”

F1: “Wait has this gone wrong before?”

F4: “Once, but that won`t happen we will have sniper rifles.”

F2: “Wait guys won`t that make, a rather loud noise?”

F4: “Not to worry, during day one I set up a deal with some black market ‘workers’ we will get some 

suppressers, no questions asked.”

F1: “But what if they fail, or what if I miss?”

F4: “You’re not the one to pull the trigger, well, you will be the ‘second shooter’ so to speak, but it 

won`t come to that most likely.”

F2: “Ok, so two snipers with two suppressors, as a backup to the penny bombs.”

F4: “That`s correct, we will be making ten penny bombs, too.”

F1: “Where are we going to put them?”

F4: “Steven will be making an appearance, introducing the latest Oak-POD (like iPod). Underneath a 

path that Steve will take, is where we will have the attack.”

F2: “I thought these were going to be ‘accidents’?”

F4: “They were, but then F3, made things complicated. Any case, we attack, and the second Steve is 

dead, (between 9:41 PM and 9:45 PM) there won`t be any calls made, because we can`t have any 

indication that we even existed near there.”

F2: “So how much should I invest when the stock goes down?”

F4: “I say $30,000. Because if it was anything like last time the stock will rise back up again in 10 

days or so. Which means we need to stretch out $17,050 for that entire period of time. This will be more like $5,000 after the equipment and such. So still enough I would say.”

F1: “Ok let’s do this.”

Black Market deal- 15 hours before the ‘big’ event

Penny Bombs made by 10 hours before the event

We now are at the scene of F1 and F4 are planting the penny bombs, under the sewer plate.

F1: “Ugh this smells terrible. Oh man this better be worth it.”

F4: “Well we can`t have it on the road they will see it, and possibly prevent it.”

F1: “How much are we to get out of this again?”

F4: “Just short of $55,000”

F1: “Ok, so what are we to do by the end of all this?”

F4: “I say by the end of it all, we should have up in the $205,000 to $687,000 range. So Charites and 

possible money to go to small time businesses, so that way we can give them the chance they would 

otherwise never get.”

F1: “Fantastic, you know what I may have miss judged you at the beginning, after all you are 

essentially me.”

F4: “Well, I am happy we made up at least too, so that should do it.”

F1: “So we are all set?”

F4: “Yeah, we just need to have the detonator enabled, with batteries. Oh and we should also review, our procedures one last time before we do this.”

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Meanwhile at F2`s place- roughly 14 hours before the big event. (Day almost 5)

F2: “Ugh, all these shows are the same, hmm, I wonder if this really is how F4 feels?”

EMAIL (on F2`s phone): “You have been charged $11,000 for hospital payments.”

F2: “Wait what, is every one fine?”

Hotel Manager Calling: “Hello, I am calling for Foybulier, is he here at this time?”

F2: “You are speaking to he.”

HM: “Well I am here to inform you that, your brother was found in a near coma like state, so I called 

the hospital.”

SIDE NOTE: Oh this should be a good time to mention that F2, is the only one with his phone. If you are wondering why he is the only one with the phone. Well I was going to include a scene where the 

original gave the phone to F2. But since I thought it would be a waste of time I left it out.

F2: “Is he ok?”

HM: “I don`t know, all I do know is that, he looked rather beat-up, and now my hotel is under 

investigation. So you better never come here again. Do you know how hard it is to maintain a 3 star 

rating when now your place looks like a scene from CSI?”

F2: “Look I am sorry.”

HM: “You better be, well I have to hang up now, and they want me for questioning now. But here`s 

the address: 7901 N 22nd St.”

F2: “Ok got it thanks for the address.”

HM: “*Dial tone*.”

F2: “Well I better go check it out when F1 & F4 come back.”

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Day 5 officially- 20 seconds before the big event.

F4: “Ok do you have your finger in that button?”

F1: “Yeah.”

F4: “Ok they will be here any second, so wait for the 3^rd car to come by that’s where he should be located.”

F1: “3^rd car got, it.”

F4 “Ok here they are.” He whispered that one.

F1 slammed his finger on the button, the booms when off with a fire ball of copper and screams.

F4 is now looking for Jobs Steven.

F4: “Ok, I have him in my sights.”

F1: “Is he dead?”

F4: “He looks dead, but it`s always good to be sure.”

F4 then got a flash back of F1 about to grab the gun from his hands.

F4: “Ok you better back off.”

F1: “I didn`t do anything.”

F4: “You need to take 10 steps back right now, or else I am going to have to clean up a new mess.”

F1: “You’re crazy.”

F4 then shot F1 in his left hip for shot one, blew off F1`s right hand for the second

F1: “Oh god, what`s wrong with you?”

F4: “I have one shot left, meant for Steven down there, so you better back off right now.”

F1 became paralyzed just then, as F4 then took a shot at Steven. Civilians soon noticed they were up 

there.

Civilian: “Who are you?”

F4 then dashed to take F1`s gun.

F4: “I will be back for you later.”

F1: “I will bleed out, what`s wrong with you?”

F4: “Well let me help you with that.”

F4 then tried to take a shot at F1. But thing happened.

F1: “I made sure that you weren`t going to get me that easily.”

F4: “Ugh, you always had to make this so hard didn`t you.”

F4 then had a new flash back, of the civilian from earlier, calling the police.

F4: “Good luck on your own.”

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11pm Day 5- F4 is now going back to F2.

F4 entered into the door.

F2: “where have you been, why do you have blood all over you, and have you seen the news?”

F4: “I did my job, I shot F1 and we are probably on the news now aren’t we.”

F2: “Yep, oh and my part of the job went well we even go $60,000.”

F4: “That`s great hear.”

F2: “So you shot F1?”

F4: “He posed a threat to our whole operation.”

F2: “Well that`s just great, we have a hospital bill along with a possibly dead F1.”

F4: “Hospital bill?”

F2: “Yeah $25K, we have no insurance.”

F4: “You don`t think this could be F3?”

F2: “I thought that, but I wasn`t sure since I never got to leave the room.”

F4: “We need to move operations out, bury these guns, and see who`s in the hospital.”

F2: “Geez, the situation isn`t this dire is it?”

F4: “More than you can even imagine.”

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Desert Scene-Day 5 at 8 am

F4: “Take the battery out of your phone, ok.”

F2: “It`s already done.”

F4: “Ok here is where we bury the evidence.”

F2: “Do you have to take off your clothes while we are out here?”

F4: “Yes, we can`t have any of this to be with us.”

F2: “How do you know this is such a good spot, much less how do you remember where it is?”

F4: “Whenever I wanted to test that I was going through this loop I put in items here exactly.”

F2: “That`s how you know how long the cycle is?”

F4: “Yes, now lest go off to the bank, the money should be transferred by now.”

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Bank Scene –Day 5 at 10 am

F2 enters the bank while F4 waits outside with a coat on.

Bank teller: “How may I help you sir?”

F2: “Yes, I would like to make a withdraw of $28,000”

Bank teller: “What do you need all this money for, if you don`t mind me asking, sir?”

F2: “I want to buy a car.”

Bank teller: “Well I am glad you went with us, you big winner. Here you go.”

F2: “Oh before I go, can you put the remainder in a new account, to pay for Hospital bills please?”

Bank teller: “Why absolutely sir.”

F2: “Thank you.”

Bank teller: “Have a nice day now.”

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Suit store Day 5 at Noon

F2: “Remind me again why we need suits?”

F4: “Well we will be going to court soon.”

F2: “What?”

F4: “Well if my memory serves me correctly, F1 should be still alive and he will want us either 

dead/behind bars.”

F2: “Geez, you were not kidding.”

F4: “Go get two suits with one being black and white. With the other white and black.”

F2: “What`s the difference?”

F4: “One has a white suit jacket, the other has a black suit jacket. They are inverted from each other.”

F2: “Ok.”

F2 comes out 35 min. later, with $1,800 less in his pocket.”

F2: “Here we go, one for you one for me.”

F4: “Ok, great. Let me put this on in an alley real quick.”

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Day 5 12:55pm

F4: “How do I look?”

F2: “Like an inverted me.”

F4: “Great, so we should have roughly 2 hours and 35 minutes left.”

F2: “Geez, is that enough time to go and see (potentially) F3?”

F4: “It should be, I am going to abandon you for a period of time.”

F2: “What do you mean?”

F4: “I will take the fall, and wait at the hide out to be captured. While you go and see F3. Got it?”

F2: “Well, are you sure?”

F4: “Yeah, oh and make sure you get me a good lawyer too, to help insure this works out.”

F2: “Well how do you know he will send the cops for the hide out? For they may tell him that his 

‘brother’ is in the hospital.”

F4: “Well that`s why I made you get two suits.”

F2: “So you don`t know?”

F4: “That’s correct.”

F2: “Well should I go the F3 then, or you?”

F4: “I will take my chances with, the hideout. So you will go to the hospital.”

F2: “Is this the end, for us?”

F4: “I can`t make that call now, we are running out of time, so just go.”

F2: “Fine, let’s see if I can make it before 3:30pm.”

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Hospital Scene Day 5- 2:50pm.

F2 arrives short on breathe from that bus ride.

F2: “Excuse me, I am the brother to Foybulier, and I have been called in saying that he should be here.

Hospital Attendant: “Well I just need you to fill out these forms.”

F2: “Ok, great. Oh also did the money come in for his bill?”

HA: “Yeah, it’s in. Everything is taken care of.”

F2: “He is still ok, right?”

HA: “Yes, in fact he woke up recently. About an hour ago I would say. But I must warn you, he is in 

rather bad condition.”

F2: “Well just as long as he is ok, and done.”

HA: “Already?”

F2: “Yeah, I want to make sure he is ok.”

HA: “Well ok, he is in room A13.”

F2: “Thank you. A13, A13, A13.”

HA: “Yeah you got it.”

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Room Scene A13 Day 5- 3:13pm

F2 opens the door.

F2: “Hello, are you here?”

F3: “Yeah.” He said in what sounded like a crushed rib kind of way.

F2: “So, what`s going on F3?”

F3: “What?”

F2: “Why did you run off, and how did you get hurt.”

F3: “Well you need to understand-“

F2: “Since we need you back real bad, everything is falling apart.” F2 interrupted. 

F3: “That`s all well and good, but-“

F2: “I need to tell you what’s going-“

F3: “Will you stop and listen.” F3 coughed violently.

F3: “I am not F3.”

F2: “Who are you then?”

F3: “I`m F1, you overly excitable mess.”

F2: “You’re kidding right?”

F1: “No I’m not, you see back when we went to see the hotel, where you go that money, I ran into 

F3.”

F2: “Oh, no.”

F1: “Yeah and he practically left me for dead.”

F2: “This is terrible.”

F1: “Yeah, oh not to mention, when you were having your little ‘chat’ F3, planned ahead and planted 

some microphones and overheard your whole conversation.”

Side note: “If you want to know the conversation look at word(s) 5200 to 5280-ish. But the main 

things where that F3 now knows F4`s weakness. Not knowing 100% of the story and that things can 

change. What he couldn`t account for was, the whole flash-back part.

F2: “You don`t understand how bad this is, we will go to court, because of what F4 did.”

F1: “Well, when I recover I can`t wait to hurt F3 like he hurt me.”

F2: “You won`t need too, F4 shot him.”

F1: “Oh so he figured out that, he wasn`t really me?”

F2: “As far as I know, no. He shot him because he almost sabotaged our plans.”

F1: “Man, this is the kind of stuff I miss, really?”

F2: “Wait, what time is it?”

F1 looked at the clock on the wall.

F1: “It`s 3:33. Why?”

F2: “Then that means F4 will be captured, and we need to tell him the situation, so that way he knows 

that the situation may have changed.”

F1: “Nothing has really changed, in fact F3 sounds better, since as far as he knows F3 just ran off. What he needs is a lawyer”

F2: “You’re right, I will call- wait he has no phone. Well I better get a lawyer, after this.”

F1: “Well how much do you have?”

F2: “$26,200”

F1: “You should look around for the best, of the best. To make sure you have everything to your 

advantage.”

F2: “Ok, you`re right.”

F1: “This feels weird.”

F2: “Which part?”

F1: “Well not one part, but this almost seems planned, like F4, really does know what we are doing.”

F2: “That can`t be true, he doesn`t know whether the cops were going to show up at hideout or the 

hospital.”

F1: “Really? Well that sounds true, since you are wearing a suit.”

F2: “Yeah, but he specifically asked for an inverted version of this.”

F1: “Why would he do that?”

F2: “I just did it, because he asked me to.”

F1: “He was testing you, then.”

F2: “How?”

F1: “Remember when F4 asked you that weird ‘favorite’ color question?”

F2: “Sure I answered black, why?”

F1: “I never understood that question, until now for; did you hear some statistics on gift giving.”

F2: “I still don`t follow.”

F1: “I may have been out of the loop for a while, but the magazines the hospital supplied me with, 

were studies to find people the perfect gift in ways without saying what do you want.”

F2: “Do you think he had this exact cycle?”

F1: “I think he was close enough since by your description, everything he has said to this point has 

come true.”

F2: “So what is your favorite color anyway?”

F1: “It`s grey.”

F2: “So what do you think he is setting up for?”

F1: “I don`t know quite yet, but when I get healed a little more, I would really like to find out.”

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Day 5 – 3:17pm (F4`s is waiting)

F4: “Well here we go again I suppose, hopefully this will be a true third times the charm.”

Knocking is made on the door.

F4 is not one to hesitate especially when he knows what’s to occur but this time, it really was temping 

to wait a while.

F4: “Who is it?”

*Silence*

F4: “Ok, if your pranksters you better cut this whole thing out.”

*F4 begins to open the door, and suddenly gets a flash back of a non-cop on the other side of the 

door.*

F4: “Wait you aren’t-“

*A distinct metallic clunk is now made.*

F4 then swings open the door.

*F4 flings himself forward pushing the man, to the point that they both go flying off the ledge, along 

for the fall are broken wooden guard rails shattering in surprise.*

*F4 and the man look into each other’s in such terror, that they both can`t quite perceive what is to 

happen next.*

Police sirens and their cars are now coming into the scene in more confusion than F4 ever had, still waiting for the splat.

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Day 5-3:19pm what happened to F4? 

F2 starts to get a nose bleed.

F1: “You ok?”

F2: “Yeah, why-“

F2`s face is now raining blood.

F1: “What`s wrong with you?”

F2: “I don`t know.”

A nurse comes walking by

Nurse: “Oh my go-“

F1: “Help my friend, he needs help.”

F2 is now shaking on the floor as if he tried to make a seizure look idle.

F1: “He needs help now!”

Nurse: “We need assistance now!”

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Day 6- Noon, “you’re not ‘Game of Thrones’ you can`t kill off your main characters like that.”

F1, F2 and F4 are now all in the same hospital room.

F4 wakes up with splinter holes in his leg bigger than his finger nail.

F4: “Ahhh!”

Nurse: “Restrain him!”

F4: “Help, me.”

Nurse: “Stop squirming you’ll rip your stiches.”

F1: “How am I the healthy one now?”

F2: “Ow.”

Nurse: “Ok, now mister….Foybulier Goldstein IV, you are now sedated. Hmmm?”

F1: “Is he going to be alright?”

Nurse: “Hmm? Oh yeah, he`ll be ok. Are you all related?”

F1: “Excuse me?”

Nurse: “Well it`s just that you all have the same name.”

F2: “I don`t think so, but we do know each other. Isn`t that right?”

F1: “Yeah we all do, rather recently too.”

Nurse: “Where did you all meet?”

F1: “Oh, well after we lost our jobs-“

Nurse: “The same day?”

F2: “Yeah, there were cut backs. Don`t interrupt.”

F1: “Anyway, we were all basically not looking where we were going, and just ran into each other.”

Nurse: “Well, let me tell you this, I am glad I minored in statistics when, because I would probably 

not believe the level of coincidences that happened. For you all had major injuries all around the 

same time.”

F2: “Yeah, well life is rather surprising like this sometimes.”

Nurse: “Is Foybulier a common name where you are from?”

F1: “You know what, I am not quite sure. Since our name is Russian, but we were not born there so 

we wouldn`t know.”

Nurse: “Well that’s nice but- Is your neck bleeding?”

F2: “Yeah, but it`s not that bad right?”

Nurse: “Ok, I will patch you up, real quick.”

She defected it, and put a bandage on it.

F1: “Thanks again, for patching up my friends there.”

Nurse: “Oh sure thing, and you wouldn`t believe the overcrowding, we have here, I mean it`s 

absurd.”

F1: “Insurance did pay for all this right?”

Nurse: “Yeah.”

F1: “That’s great.”

*The intercom in the room buzzed in*

Desk Representative: “Hey Linda, you wouldn`t believe who is going to visit, this room right now.”

*Linda then pressed a button, presumably to respond to the Desk Rep.*

Linda: “What`s going on?”

Desk Rep.: “Foybulier Goldstein III, says he wants to visit the room you’re in right now. Do you 

think the patients are well enough to talk to him right now?”

All the Foybulier`s turned pail white with discomfort.

Nurse: “No, they aren`t quite at the point of visiting. Even for family.”

Desk Rep.: “Well are they well enough to read legal documents?”

*Nurse pulled her head away from the intercom.*

Nurse: “Are you well enough to handle legal papers right now?”

F1&F2: “Sure.”

*Nurse flunk herself back to the intercom.*

Nurse: “Foybulier Goldstein I & II seem to be applicable, but not the IV.”

Desk Rep.: “Well they all have separate documents.”

Nurse: “Ok send them up now.”

Desk Rep.: “Ok.”

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Day 6- 12:25pm “All together.”

Assistant: “Here you go, and you, and when you wake up.”

F1&F2: “What is this?”

Assistant: “I am not allowed to read legal documents, I am only an intern. Bye, bye now.”

F1: “Well, this is concerning.”

F2: “We really did get sued.”

F4 just snored, while looking as if he is having the worst dream of his life right now.

F1: “Well at least we have, three days to heal and prep.”

F2: “Yeah, but still.”

F4 woke up gasping every breathe he could breathe, at that moment.

F4: “No, I`m not guilty I swear.”

F1&F2 both looked at each other with a concerned look on their faces.

F4: “Oh, it hasn`t happened yet.”

F2: “Wait are we going to be found guilty?”

F4: “I, can`t quite tell anymore.”

F1: “From your 17 loops, how similar have you gotten to this?”

F4: “Well this point specifically, I don`t know. Since on the 5^th or potentially the 15^th run about the 

gun jammed on the second shot.”

F1: “5^th or 15^th?”

F2: “What gun?”

F4: “Look, I had a concussion recently I am surprised that I remember my name right now. As for the 

gun, F3 put a man willing to kill for money, but not quite enough skill to reach assassin on me. But 

for some reason the gun jammed on the first shot.”

F2: “How come you are not dead?”

F4: “The door just begins to open last time this happened and I guess he had a bit of a trigger finger, 

so he shot me through the door.”

F1: “Ok, great we now have an act of self-defense on our hands. We can charge F3 with that.”

F4: “We will, but he has Corporation murder on us, and since he snitched about being an accomplice, 

and on account that I blew his hand off we or at least me. Will be getting a far rougher time than 

him.”

F1: “Is that why he sent someone after you, instead of himself?”

F4: “Yeah, also the wounds were still a little fresh for murdering standards.”

F2: “So what are we to do, now?”

F4: “I have a plan that is different from last time, so this one will work better.”

F1: “Let’s hear it.”

F4: “F2; you need to order new suits for us online, with the same parameters (sizes and colors) as last 

time. While F1 and I look online for the best lawyers possible.”

F1: “Wait like plural?”

F4: “Yeah, I had to add more to the plan from last time.”

F1: “Ok, if you think that will help.”

F2: “What should F1 wear?”

F1: “Get me gun-metal colored suit. With a shark skin shine.”

F2: “Ok fine.”

F4 then pressed the ‘need help nurse button’.

Nurse showed up a minute or so later.

Nurse: “What`s going on?”

F4: “We need some laptops please.”

Nurse: “Oh, you’re awake. But what do I look like an errand girl?”

F4: “Apologies, may you please get me the phone please?”

Nurse: “Oh, I see, just make it quick.”

Nurse hands F4 the phone

F4: “Thank you very much.”

Nurse: “Sure thing.”

F4 dials the number into the phone

F4: “Hello Buy Best? I would like to place an order for three laptops with this description: Lenovo 

14" ThinkPad T460s Ultrabook.”

Side note: (Yes this is a real laptop; I make my stories this accurate.)

F4: “Oh, may I have this, by tomorrow?”

Operator: “Yes sir that will be $4332.79, plus $200 for such short notice, making your total to be a 

$4532.79. Please, oh also where would you like this sent too?”

F4: “Hospital at ________.”

Operator: “Ok, it will be there, by 3pm, is that ok?”

F4: “Yes, just as long as it`s on debit.”

Operator: “Ok, thank you for calling.”

F4: “Sure.”

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Day 7- 4:45pm “What a week?”

Mail gender non-specific individual: “Sign here please.”

F4: “Thank you, oh can you please hand this out to the rest of my associates?”

Mail: “Sure thing.”

*Mail leaves.*

F4: “Lets get to work.”

F2: “Will get your suits soon.”

F1: “So do we have a price limit, after all this for the, well everything?”

F4: “We only have a whopping $27,467.21 left to spend, and then we are truly broke.”

Side note: If you have been keeping track that actually is all they have left after all that.

F2: “So, how much is that going to get us?”

F4: “Well F2, you will get to work with a mere $5,000. While we try and get a ‘decent’ lawyer with 

the remaining $22,467.21.”

F1: “Well, I think I see were this is going.”

F4: “What do you mean?”

F1: “Well that dream about the case ending with us all guilty, the cheap lawyer. We have basically 

nothing, how do you expect us to get out of this one?”

F4: “Well, I can confirm that even though we are in a state that has the death penalty, I can for the 

most part guarantee that we will not be put to death, but we may go to jail.”

F1: “Well, something needs to be done, for I really don`t want to experience the problems that we 

will encounter. It would be too much.”

F4: “I understand where you are coming from, I have had this 17 times after all, and it`s all a little to 

much for even me.”

F1: “Yeah, yeah but how can we ensure that the loop won`t begin again?”

F4: “We, can`t, and I do believe that the loop will end on this one, for a gun jamming on first shot as 

apposed to the second is a big deal, we may have enough to get out of it all.”

F2: “Well that gives us all the reason to fix this now, for what if we get life and the loop stops because of the variation levels.”

F1: “Wouldn`t that be a good thing though?”

F2: “No, don`t you understand? When the loop ends it ends with the current chain of events and then goes into a new universe. Which is why F4 wanted to donate to charities since then he could have all his morals be cleared.

F1: “How do you know this?”

F4: “Yes F2 where did you get these accusations from?”

F2: “I don`t know, I felt like I wasn`t myself for a second. Apologies.”

F4: “Well let’s get back to work, time is of the essence.”

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Day 8-6:00am “Well then.”

F2: “We have been up all night, and I barely found anything that would give us even the slightest 

chance, of hope. How are things on your end?”

F4 & F1: “Not, very well.”

F1: “Stop asking, you stated this question like 20 times already.”

F4: “There is still, hope.”

F2: “I thought that you did this before?”

F4: “Yes, but apparently the variation is getting stronger because the people whom I called before are 

now no longer available. So something is occurring that I have not anticipated.”

F1: “What might that be?”

F4: “I don`t know quite yet, ok?”

F2: “Well, that means maybe we should come clean about some things.”

F4: “What are you saying?”

F2: “Well-“

F4 then had a flash back to when he buried the guns in the desert.

F1: “F4 are you ok?”

F4 looked as if he was having a seizure.

F2 was pressing the nurse button.

The nurses rushed in to try and assist F4.

But all they could do was sedate him, and hope that he wakes up.

Nurse: “These are no normal seizures.”

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Day 9- 9:21am “Court day.”

F2 and F1 were the only ones capable to actually go to court.

Court was in session.

Police: “All stand to rise for the honorable judge Jones.”

J. Jones: “You may sit down, court is in session, but wait where Foybulier IV is?”

F2: “He was not capable to arrive due to a medical emergency.”

J. Jones: “Oh, I believe then we will need to post pond this case.” –the judge said in a very glitched 

voice.

F1: “Your honor, are you ok?”

J. Jones: “Yes I feel-, and the defendant is found guilty.” –this time in an even more corrupted tone.

The Foybulier’s look at each other and then around at the rest of the room, as it was starting to alter.

The court room was twisting and bending. It even looked transparent, with a light shining through it, 

making everything become more unbearable to see. Yet the Foybulier’s looked unchanged by the 

surroundings, while everyone else changed to unrecognizable figures.

F3: “What is going on?”

Then everything stood still, and became wire-boxed.

The Judge was now a giant and the jury was nowhere to be found, presumably sacrificed to make the 

Judge enlarged.

J. Jones: “Oh now that is better.”

The Foybulier’s turned pale.

J. Jones: “I hate that transformation, but you four did bring me here, so this better be important.”

F2: “Us four?”

F1: “But there is only three?”

J. Jones: “Enough of your jokes now, let’s get on with all you, whom have failed me.”

F3: “What did we do?”

J. Jones: “You all failed to allow the universe to get out of this loop, 16 times in a row, and now it is 

the time for you to be vanquished from this realm.”

All the Foybulier’s: “NOOO!”

F4 dashed in.

F4: “Stop!”

J. Jones: “How are you in two places? No matter, you have failed me as well, if you have survived the 

dimensional shift.”

F4: “You did not keep your end of the deal.”

F1: “Deal, what deal?”

J. Jones: “Silence! No, I kept it, you had 17 tries to fix, the shift of the universe, and you failed me. 

You all failed me.”

F4: “This is the 17^th time, but the month is not up yet.”

*J. Jones looked at a mysterious chart he had in his pocket*

J. Jones: “What did you do, to throw off the cosmos themselves?”

F4: “More than any of you will ever imagine.”

J. Jones: “Well, since you did manage to pull off more than any mere mortal before you.”

F4: “For your mistake, you owe us a; ‘Supreme Universal Variation Event’.”

*J. Jones shuttered, in confusion and disbelief.*

J. Jones: “That could rip open the universe.”

F4: “It could also, stop the looping, and you ensured me that if you made any mistake, that you would 

give me one of the biggest Deus ex Machina`s in all of short story telling.”

J. Jones: “I have no reason to listen to you, the mere mortal.”

F4: “No reason except the laws of the gods.”

F1: “Laws of the Gods?”

J. Jones: “It was designed to ensure us Gods would never become too corrupted by our hubris, and it 

also states that; ‘in the event of four mistakes in a row, I can no longer interact with the human world’ 

so after this conversation ends you are all on your own.”

F4: “I have one request for you, since you are no longer a god, whom can interfere with this world.”

J. Jones: “Why in the world would I help you? You got me into this mess.”

F4: “That’s just it, you merely ‘assist’ us, with no true absolute assistance, and this problem will all 

go away.”

J. Jones: “Very well, you will be at day 27, and all the events will be neutral in everyone’s perceive.”

F4: “You will not be disappointed and this will all go away I assure you. Isn`t that right?”

F1: “Absolutely.”

F2: “You, know it.”

F3: “You didn`t even have to ask.”

J. Jones: “This very event is in fact enough variation to open a portal, but only one of you will be 

allowed to get through this, so good luck with that.”

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Day 27- 2:34pm “The end is nigh.”

All of the Foybulier`s were sucked into this field, where a portal arises, and since F3 was separated 

from the rest of the group he is in fact closer to the portal. So now this begins all four of this stories 

ending….enjoy.

ENDING 1 the sad one.

F4: “Ok, F3 has a head start, and no way are we going to have his perfect world, be the world we 

enter next. So we need to get him, let’s go.”

F2: “Ok, let’s get him.”

F4: “F1 try to slow him down, so that way, maybe we get to the portal first, after all in your reality 

you ran slightly faster than the rest of us.”

F1 then ran off to stop F3.

F1 has now caught up with F3

F1: “Ugh.” As F1 slammed into F3.

F3: “Get off of me, you are crazy, F4 has been brain washing you.”

F1: “Shut your face.”

F1 is now wrestling F3

F3: “You, know F1 you might be the faster of the bunch, but you were never, quite the most 

resourceful.”

F3 then took out a modified pen, with a titanium near knife tip to it.

F1: “No *stab*….*panting*…you cheated.”

F3 now submerged in the fluid of his rival.

F3: “You aren’t meant to be in this world.”

F1 was left to bleed out.

The scene is now brought to F2 and F4 nearing the portal.

F4: “We are almost there.”

F2: “We made it, all the hard ships are now put behind us.”

F4: “Yeah, now, if you excuse me, I have a new Utopia world for us to live in.”

F2: “Wait, who said anything about you being in this whole world creating thing?”

F4: “Hey, I deserve it, I had to go through 17 runs of this, you barley experienced a quarter of 

everything.”

F2: “That’s what I am saying, do you really think anyone whom has lived through this 17 times by 

now would really be stable?”

F4: “You don`t know what you are really saying do you?”

F2: “I mean you have become so messed up that murder doesn`t even concern you anymore.”

F4: “I have been through more than you can imagine, don`t even start with me.”

F2: “You, are not really enough to have a world are you?”

F4 then took out a Taser and parlayed F2

F2 is now lying on the floor, in pure pain.

F4: “I don`t have time for you, F3 will finish you off, have a nice life.”

F4 then walked through the portal, and F3 is now with F2….THE END

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ENDING 2 the bitter-sweet one

F4: “Ok, we need to get to the portal, and stop F3. F2 go ahead to stop him, we will go and try to beat him to the punch.”

F2: “Why me?”

F4: “You are the most agile of the bunch, now go!”

F2 the sprinted to get F3

F2 is getting close to F3

F3: “I see you there, but you are no match for me.”

F2: “Shut, up, I am not that fast.”

F3 pulled out his modified pen which did a little more than be a make shift knife.

F2 then stopped, his exhaustion and panting became too much for him.

F3: “Do you need me to slow down, do I?”

F3 then shot the head of his pen into F2`s head. (The bolt of the pen shot was 3inches long.)

F2 didn`t die yet.

F2 is now trying to still fight F3

F3: “Wow, you really never do give up, but I never thought that a man without a hand would defeat a 

man with another.”

F4 and F1 sneaked by and are nearing the portal.

F1: “We are going to make it.”

F4 then fell over.

F1: “Don`t do this to me, come on. Ugh, I need to do it.”

F3 and F1 are now at the portal at the same time.

F3: “There is only enough room for one of us.”

F1: “That, ‘one of us’ is not going to be you.”

F1 and F3 both make it into the portal at the same time…..THE END

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ENDING 3 the other bitter sweet one

F4: “We all need to get F3 at the same time.”

F2: “Let’s do this.”

F1: “Let’s go already.”

All three, try to catch up with F3 but F1 got there first.

F1: “You, better give me a good reason, not to waste you right now.”

F3: “This.”

F3 then shot out his pen and F1 dodged it.

F1: “Nice try.”

F3: “Who says it was meant for you.”

F4 was then shot in the head, F2 fell to the ground.

F1 looked back.

F1: “Noo.”

F3 then slapped F1 across the face, making him fall off the hill.

F3: “No more bloodshed will happen anymore”

F3 walked through the portal…..THE END.

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ENDING 4 the happy one

F4: “Let’s all go after F3, but F2 and I will go from the sides, while you (F1) go in for the main 

attack.”

F1 goes out ahead

F3 tries to shoot his pen gun, but only hits F1`s foot

When F3 goes to finish the job

F4 and F2 go in at take out F3

F3 is then killed, and F2 with F4`s help, pick up F1.

F4: “Well we may not all be able to go through this but.-“

Just then enough variation was created with the death of F3. Making the portal large enough for all 

three of them to go through.

F2: “Very convenient indeed.”

F1, F2 and F4 all go through the portal and have the ultimate universe with multiple levels of help.

The all lived happily ever after…..The very happy end.

Just a quick side note I wanted the murder of F3 to have more meaning, like he induced them to have 

this many troubles in less than a month, and what do you think he can do by the end of this month.

So, yeah. Oh also I have put a mere 21 different secrets through this entire story, try and find them all. So that’s all folks.

I hoped you enjoyed reading this crazy story, and please tell me what (if any) of the endings you liked the best. Apologies if any part of this is not grammatically correct, I had to wrap this all up somehow though.