So I may end up doing more projects on this blog, but other than that, when it comes to school related topics. I am done. All that I have done or ever will do has come to a stop, so all have to say is that's all folks.
So if you want to see anything more just tell me and that's about it.
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I began this project thinking I would do a collection of several short stories, instead of a rather long, single one but, that's what happens. This project would have never even occurred if I didn't remember to create a story off a title I created about 2 years ago.
I had the idea of a title called penny killer, and didn't do anything about it for those 2 years, then this summative came around and then from a title I created this story.
I write a lot like how I play chess, I have a great idea in the beginning and then it gradually gets worse and worse as the story goes on. With this story I tried to invert this, I began terrible and worked my way up till it was actually rather enjoyable.
I am a up and coming writer whom has not been discovered yet, with a descent idea. Plus the best part of me having short stories, is if it`s bad you only wasted a few minutes of your time. Not an entire book`s worth. Oh also there will be secrets in the final story
Monday, May 16, 2016
Monday, May 9, 2016
Update #12......the final UPDATE!
So with this being my final update, and my 'final' product has already been posted, I think this should be the one post that has the final explanation so if you still have not read the story, here are the spoilers and over all, well everything of this story. Starting after this line.
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SPOILERS
So here is my summary of the story in 30 words (or less).
A person in an infinite loop, finds a new dimension that will set him free, so that's the main goal of the story.
Ok, now here is the long story, after this dotted line.
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So the main character Foybulier has just lost his job, and is relatively fresh out of college, and after a while he finds himself just walking around until he runs into himself, from another time line that is in this universe for some reason. When he meets, himself Foybulier then splits into three other versions of himself making four in total.
(I made this story one of my first Fantasy based Sci-fi stories).
The reason they exist, and interact with each other in the first place is because I made the universe run on an auto correct system, where 99% is close enough so this quantity of matter must be the same. This worked very well until now, since you see Foybulier is so similar across most other time lines that his existence has been mistaken for himself from another reality. The universe then realizes this, a mere 28 day later so it (the universe) basically makes a big reset on everything.
Its kind of like going to an older save file on a program or a game.
But the only thing that is not reset after the universal reset, is Foybulier 4 (or F4). But the only reason that is, is because the universe basically fused all other 'currently' existing Foybulier's into one, giving some memories that would other wise be lost, into one being. That all worked rather well, except for one thing, the nanosecond the universe chose also had a pre-existing version of Foybulier. Thus being the cycle again.
I designed this to happen 17 times (the reason I choice that number is because it's relatively high, but not too high of a number), meaning that F4 has done this for over a year or so now. So its up to them all to end this madness before the time is up, because as you may have expected Foybulier 4 after all this craziness is rather irritated, by all this. Practically rendering him unstable, so the plan from that is to create as much variation in the universe that the universe itself can`t merely reset everything anymore.
The reason I did that is, an extension to that game files analogy, lets say you have corrupted files, and you have already reset the game so many times, so what do you do? You (if you are a programmer) fix the problem so this doesn`t happen again.
I also did the classic do nothing and everything ideas since that seemed like a bunch of variation. Oh I did make death permanent though since I feel otherwise the story would have no tension, for they could just do it all again.
Oh, also there are 4 different endings. To represent the four different Foybulier's, since I knew no one ending would be good, so I gave the readers some variety.
That's basically an explanation and elongated summary of my story.
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SPOILERS
So here is my summary of the story in 30 words (or less).
A person in an infinite loop, finds a new dimension that will set him free, so that's the main goal of the story.
Ok, now here is the long story, after this dotted line.
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So the main character Foybulier has just lost his job, and is relatively fresh out of college, and after a while he finds himself just walking around until he runs into himself, from another time line that is in this universe for some reason. When he meets, himself Foybulier then splits into three other versions of himself making four in total.
(I made this story one of my first Fantasy based Sci-fi stories).
The reason they exist, and interact with each other in the first place is because I made the universe run on an auto correct system, where 99% is close enough so this quantity of matter must be the same. This worked very well until now, since you see Foybulier is so similar across most other time lines that his existence has been mistaken for himself from another reality. The universe then realizes this, a mere 28 day later so it (the universe) basically makes a big reset on everything.
Its kind of like going to an older save file on a program or a game.
But the only thing that is not reset after the universal reset, is Foybulier 4 (or F4). But the only reason that is, is because the universe basically fused all other 'currently' existing Foybulier's into one, giving some memories that would other wise be lost, into one being. That all worked rather well, except for one thing, the nanosecond the universe chose also had a pre-existing version of Foybulier. Thus being the cycle again.
I designed this to happen 17 times (the reason I choice that number is because it's relatively high, but not too high of a number), meaning that F4 has done this for over a year or so now. So its up to them all to end this madness before the time is up, because as you may have expected Foybulier 4 after all this craziness is rather irritated, by all this. Practically rendering him unstable, so the plan from that is to create as much variation in the universe that the universe itself can`t merely reset everything anymore.
The reason I did that is, an extension to that game files analogy, lets say you have corrupted files, and you have already reset the game so many times, so what do you do? You (if you are a programmer) fix the problem so this doesn`t happen again.
I also did the classic do nothing and everything ideas since that seemed like a bunch of variation. Oh I did make death permanent though since I feel otherwise the story would have no tension, for they could just do it all again.
Oh, also there are 4 different endings. To represent the four different Foybulier's, since I knew no one ending would be good, so I gave the readers some variety.
That's basically an explanation and elongated summary of my story.
Monday, May 2, 2016
Notes on the story
I designed the story like a screen play, so are to help make it fell more like a movie or a play
Update #11
I have finally completed my story, and its 12553 words long and some how equates to 34 pages. Again this is a short story, any case if you do read it, you will soon find out that this is a...
Satire of all writings
Time travel story
Inter-dimensional travel story
Also has the protagonist, antagonist and side characters are all technically the same person...sort of.
With no spoilers given this story goes into the whole idea that if future you talks to you from the past, the universe will explode. But in my story not only does the universe stay completely fine, but interaction between timelines is encouraged. The rules are you can do anything you want, with the consequences that follow, but if you reach the 28 day mark you get a reset and do it all again. I also put Deus ex machine in it as a joke, that makes the end climax a little more exciting. So as you may have noticed it has most of the major categories of story telling, all put together with a twist that makes this story different enough to have actually original ideas, proving to everyone out there that even in this sequel, percale and reboot world that we live in, there still are some points of view that remain original.
If this story is actually liked I will make some spin off stories, focusing on different aspects of this idea. I will also do challenge stories where you give me parameters, and other ideas to work off of, and I turn that into a story. For if I can turn a title (Penny Killer) and turn it into this. I can do some level of absurd ideology that may prove to be fairly enjoyable to read. You will have to recall that none of my writings are very good, but they are at least fairly fun. So hopefully that will be enough for you all to see this and have some level of enjoyment out of this, who knows.
Satire of all writings
Time travel story
Inter-dimensional travel story
Also has the protagonist, antagonist and side characters are all technically the same person...sort of.
With no spoilers given this story goes into the whole idea that if future you talks to you from the past, the universe will explode. But in my story not only does the universe stay completely fine, but interaction between timelines is encouraged. The rules are you can do anything you want, with the consequences that follow, but if you reach the 28 day mark you get a reset and do it all again. I also put Deus ex machine in it as a joke, that makes the end climax a little more exciting. So as you may have noticed it has most of the major categories of story telling, all put together with a twist that makes this story different enough to have actually original ideas, proving to everyone out there that even in this sequel, percale and reboot world that we live in, there still are some points of view that remain original.
If this story is actually liked I will make some spin off stories, focusing on different aspects of this idea. I will also do challenge stories where you give me parameters, and other ideas to work off of, and I turn that into a story. For if I can turn a title (Penny Killer) and turn it into this. I can do some level of absurd ideology that may prove to be fairly enjoyable to read. You will have to recall that none of my writings are very good, but they are at least fairly fun. So hopefully that will be enough for you all to see this and have some level of enjoyment out of this, who knows.
Sunday, May 1, 2016
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